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  1. Phenom Rouse

    Do you know spend time with your family and want to know how your reading the right story. What I’m going to do for my family is set the table. The reason I’m going to do that is because every night my parents have the dinner ready. Another reason is because they take time out of there day to make me comfortable while I’m eating I’m going to do the same. The last reason is because there always there for me.
    Every night my parents put my drink out and my plate of food with my utensils too. I think I should just repay that back. They also try and make it look comfortable. They say whatever goes around comes around. Just for setting up the table might find a 20 on the side walk .
    My parents are probably the most busiest people in mankind. There always running around out the house doing Erin’s and taking care of business. But of all the things they can do all day they fix me up a fancy dinner. But most kids my age take it for granted. My parents are always there for me. They put cloths on my back and a roof over my head. My parents give me things that are amazing. Plus my parents always have to put up with me and my stupid moments. I just feel I need to pay them back.
    Thanks giving is about giving things. What I’m going to give my family is my assistants. Its not just about eating its about giving. That’s what I’m going to do.

  2. Have you ever done something special for your family?
    I would make my family a big meal on Thanks giving. I would make them a meal because they provide clothes, food, support.

    One of the first reasons I would make my family a meal because they provide clothes they provide clothes because they care about you and don’t want you to look dirty around people. Or messed up because I know your mom buys you clothes too so you wont have to wear the same outfit over and over.

    One of the second reasons I would make my family a meal because they give you support like if you just got in trouble for something they would be there to help you and make sure you don’t do anything to hurt anyone.

    One of the third reasons I would make my family a meal because they provide food and they provide food to make sure that you are ok and don’t call them saying your mom didn’t feed you and stuff.

    The last reason I would make my family a meal because I love them and I or anyone else have to make sure that you take good care of your family and keep them in good hands especially if they are younger then you or don’t be shy around them or anything.

  3. Omar Morales 11-24-15

    Would you like to do something special for a family member or friend? Well something special I could do for a family member or friend is giving them a present, because they would be happy, exited and thankful. Knowing that they would feel all these emotions I would feel happy and proud of myself for what I did. Know I will explain why they would feel these emotions.
    The first reason they would feel happy is because they are probably not used to you giving them a present. Another reason why they would be happy is because when you give someone a present of course they would be happy, At least I would The last reason why they would feel happy is because They would be happy of what you got them no matter what is it. It’s the thought that counts right?
    Next they would be excited because when you give someone a present they would be excited to see what you got them. Another reason that they would be exited is because if you give someone a present and they have been bugging you around for a certain item then they would be excited to see if you got them that certain item. The last reason they would be exited is because when you give someone a present they get a certain expression that expression is excited because presents are amazing.
    Some reasons why they would be thankful is because if you give someone a present they should be thankful because it’s something they are getting for free it’s not money coming out of there pocket. The second reason why they should be thankful is because not everyone in the world is getting a gift, you are the lucky number of people getting it. The last reason they should be thankful is because it is a good gift that is going to be amazing no matter what.
    In conclusion these are the reasons why your family member or friend should be happy, exited and thankful. Now that I have shown you what they would feel don’t you want to do it? Just to make them feel these emotions?

  4. Something special for my family
    Did you ever think that since you are young you can’t do nothing special for my family? , Well yes but if I was to do something special for my family it would be to have a whole day of fun for them. Where you eat and play and take pictures in certain places because I love them and they do everything for me. Also they love to eat, play, and take pictures in certain places.
    The first reason I would do it is because I love them and the only reason why I love them is because they care for me. Also they support me in important choices. Also they provide me with food and clothes. Also they help my mom and brothers and sister.
    The second reason why I would do that is because they do everything for me and why I say that is because when I need something they won’t always have it now but they still give it to me. Also when they say they would give me something they always find a way to give it me. For example when my mom said she would get an American girl doll for Christmas she didn’t get it at the exact time but she still got it in January.
    The third reason to why I would do that is because they love to eat, play, and take pictures in certain places. I say that because my family loves to go to a restaurant called BBQ’S because they have ribs cornbread and etc. Also my family loves to go to a game arcade called Dave & Buster’s cause the have games and prize’s . Also they love to take pictures at a big tree on Christmas I New York because that is like a tradition when we go there.
    This is why I would love to do something special for my family because I love them, they do everything for me and they love to eat, play, and take pictures in certain places. But if you ever want to do something special remember this and do it for your family. Also I really would do it if I could. That is why I want to do something special for my family and why.

  5. Have you ever did something for thanksgiving? Something I’m thinking about cooking an strawberry cake with white icing. I want to cook this because I can have bragging rights. Also, I never bake or cook or baking for them they cook the food but I always eat the food. Also another reason is that she give me tips t become an nice young man. Also my last reason it that she buy mostly all my nice clothes without me telling her what I want.
    Some Reason why I want bragging rights because if it is good I can say I’m the one who made it. Another reason why I want bragging rights because my cousin and sometimes my brothers be saying I can’t cook. I want to prove my brothers and cousins wrong. Then laugh at them when they say it is good. Then say no you can’t have no thing I cooked it is nasty member. I can’t cook right to make the mad
    My reasons why I want to cook for them. Is because I’m the one who always eat. But do not make the food or help because I be lazy sometimes. So, this time I want to make something for everyone I know like strawberry cake with white icing. Then I can get the first piece too. Then they can’t call me fat when im the one who made it. Also I can lick the bowl when I making it too.
    My last reasons why I want to bake that cake because she buy things. Some of the Clothes, Shoes, My house and food she provides me. Also sometimes she buy me clothes from H & M for me. Also she buy me the shoes I want and provide me an roof over my head. Them cook good meals for me everyday so I’m thankful for that.
    The thing I want to do is bake an cake for my family. Cause it mean a lot to me if they enjoy it. I really want to make it because I want o brag to them. Second cause she always cook from me. My last reason is because she provide me many things. I wrote this because if you want to do something for someone go for it. Cause I’m sure they will like it.

  6. My Thanksgiving surprise

    Have you ever done anything nice for your family? Well I’ve haven’t but this year I was planning a surprise for thanksgiving. The plan was to make three apple pies with cream on top. I’m doing this because my family does so much for like, take care of me, show me love and, support me too.
    They take care of me by letting stay at their house for a few days. Feeding me .buy me clothes for when I need .make sure I’m ok and getting everything I need.
    My family show me love by telling me they love me. Hugs and kisses. And all ways be there for me when I need them. They do so much for me.
    Also my family supports me every day at home. Telling me not to do this and that. Telling me to do this when I’m in school to make my life easy in the further. They are always on me all the time.
    So 2 days before thanksgiving me and my cousin shanya is going shopping to get what we need to make the pies. When were done shopping we are going wait Intel tomorrow to make the pies. The next day, me and my cousin shanya started the pies at her house, put the problem was that lots people live there at her house.so we mad it at my house.
    After three hours three pies was mad, we my cousin put the pies in the fridges .now today is thanksgiving everyone was surprise that a 12 year old and a 14 year old mad these pies. Everyone had a slice of pie they eat those pies so fast …I didn’t even got to eat the pie.

  7. Rasheen Dawkins 11/24/15

    If you would be able to, would you like to do anything special for your family? I don’t know about you, but I know I would. If you keep reading this, I will tell you how I am going to plan this all out. I am planning to go to an arts school after high school. Next, I am going to become an artist and get a lot of money for my paintings. Then I am going to give money to my family. My family has done a lot for me. They provided me with food, clothes, and support.
    I am really grateful. Without food I would probably be dead. I would like to thank my mom for providing me with that.
    I am also thankful for having clothes. Some people in the world don’t have clothes, and I don’t want to walk around naked. That is another reason why I am grateful.
    My family has also gave me has also gave me a lot of support throughout my life. They gave me support at graduations, award ceremonies, and much more. They always say they are proud of me.
    At least I can try to give back. I think they are going to be really happy when I show them their surprise! There are going to be tears of joy everywhere! My family has gone of their way to do a lot for me. Remember you can always give back, even if it’s a little, it’s the thought that counts!

  8. Daphne Garcia
    Have you ever done anything special for your family? Well I haven’t. So this year for thanksgiving I want to do something special for my family. I don’t usually cook because I can’t cook. But this year I want to try my best and cook a pineapple cake for my family. Because my family had provided me with many things for example they proved me with clothes, support, and love.
    I want to do something special for my family because they provided me many things. One thing that they provide for me was clothes. My aunts and uncle bought me clothes. For example when I go shopping with them and I see something that I like they will buy it for me. I am really thankful for that. That’s one reason why I want to do something special for my family.
    The second reason why I want to do something for my family is because they had provided me with support. They were there when I was going through a hard time. For example when my grandma died I cried a lot and they were there to cheer me up. And when I need to study for a test they will help me out. And when I need help with my homework I can just ask them and they will help me. Or when I need a ride to school or ride to the movies or the mall I can just ask one of my family members and they will take me. That’s my second reason why I want to do something special for my family.
    The third reason why I want to do something special for my family is because they love me and I love them. My family had showed me love they had been there when I was going through hard times they also had been there with their support and I love them because of that. They show me their love by leading me to the right path and by protecting me and caring for me. And I am really thankful for that. That’s the third reason why I want to do something special for my family.
    Like I said I want to do something special for my family because they provide me with clothes, support, and love. The special thing I want to do for my family is that I want to bake them a pineapple cake. I never did something special for my family .except the fact that I am still going to school and that I won’t drop out of school. Anyway I think everyone should do something special for their family to show them that they are thankful for what their families provide for them. I know that baking a cake is not something big but at least I am showing that I care and that I am thankful for what I have and for the things my family had done for me. That’s why I want to do something special for my family.

  9. Have you ever been asked a dumb question by someone? I have, and today I want to talk about is the present I would give to the people is to help them understand words, meanings and there spelling. One reason why I want to help them is so they don’t have to ask us these questions where it makes them bad. Another reason why I would help them is so that if they have friends that are like that they can help them in the same way. My last reason why I would help them is so they would better grades because so teachers grade on the spelling and stuff like that and if they spell it wrong the teacher is going to take off points from that one mistake.
    My first reason is to help them on their words, because sometimes people have hard time thinking of the right to use and if they can’t find the right word they might use the words thing, what’s a name or more instead of use the correct word. Another reason why I want to help them with their words is because sometimes you could be talking about something and then maybe one of my friends would ask “what is that?”, then you have to explain it to them what it means.
    My second reason is to help them with the meaning of the words because sometimes they can know the word but not the meaning. So if I were you I would sit them down and give them some words they know but not the meaning to and make them study them until she knows them by heart. One other reason I would help them is because as there friend or family I care and I want to help the get better at things they do.
    My third and last reason is to help them with their spelling. I want to help them with their spelling is so they know the word and how to spell it too, also I want to help them with things that they spell like big words. By helping people with thing like spelling is just helping them improve their spelling were it helps them in language arts and things that you need to write which is really every class you have.

    So that concludes why I would help them with their words, meanings and spelling. I hope you will do the same for others too, just like I did. I also hope you enjoyed reading my essay on the present I would give to someone.

  10. Do you have that one grandma that would do anything for you? I do that’s why I’m going to buy my grandma a I pad. The first reason why is because she always give me her last. The second reason why is because she loves me. The third reason why is because she will buy me anything thing for me even if she mad at me. This essay is going to tell you the three reasons in detail why I’m going to buy my grandma an I pad.
    The first reason why I really want to buy my grandma a I pad is because she always gives me her last. For example say is she only has $5 and I want to go the store she would give it to me. That’s the first reason why I’m going to do something special for my grandma.
    Another reason why I’m going to do something special for my grandma is because she loves me. For example every night she tells me she loves me and every morning a I wake up she tell me she loves me. That’s makes me happy so that really why I’m going to buy her a I pad.
    The last reason why I’m going to buy me grandma a I pad is because she do anything for me even when she mad at me. For example if I get smart with her and we go somewhere and I want something even thou I got smart she would still get it for me. This is the last reason why I’m going to buy mom grandma a I pad.
    In conclusion these are the three reasons why I’m going to buy my grandma a I pad. First reason is because she always gives me her last. The second reason is because she loves me. The third is because she would do anything for me.so if you do have a grandma or family member that does these things for you. You should do something special for them.

  11. Ronya spady 703 11/24/15

    THE ELEPHANT GIFT

    Have you ever met an elder person that adores elephants so much to the point where all you see is elephant statues everywhere inside their home? Well my grandma / aunt adores elephants so much she has elephant statues soon as you walk in , maybe you’ll see one right beside you. Listen up and I’ll tell you my point of this story ….

    Well you already get the point of her loving elephants so much, so I’ll move on. Many people would have thought I would’ve got her an actual elephant, but nah even though she will or have dreamed of getting one or actually owning one , realife elephants are very dangerous. Although my grandma / aunt is a grateful lady instead of a realife elephant she’ll take an elephant statue. If you’re not familiar about “elephant statues “well elephant statues are fictional posing elephants in many creative positions, kind of like the U.S.A liberty statue but it’s obviously an elephant.

    The reason why I want to buy this reasonable gift for my grandma / aunt is because when my mommy was little she helped out my original grandma by watching my mom and getting her to school while my grandma had stuff to do. And I want to take back that memory with a special elephant that will break her mind into pieces! Another reason why I want to buy her this gift is because she even helped my mom out at times too by doing the same thing she did with my mommy. In fact this rings a bell about why I call my aunt “grandma “.

    The kind of elephant I want to give to my grandma / aunt is a custom made elephant. The elephant would be made out of gold with about 7 diamonds on each side, and a metal seat that you ride on when you get on elephants! The elephant also will be about the size of a big piggy bank! I think this will be the most shocking gift she will or have ever gotten! I will also be happy and thankful as if she be the same which is she’s absolutely going to be.

    Now that you know what an elephant statue is, you will blow someone’s mind because sometimes people secretly like things …. In fact you might want to get one for yourself? Its millions of people in the world that’s more upsess with elephants then my grandma / aunt. But long as the person happy and thankful you should be the same of what they feeling.

  12. Do you ever wish you could get your mom a great gift? This year I plan to do that and I already know what she wants. She wants footie pj’s. But she wants snoopy on them. Man I really need to start saving my money. She really needs this this for all her hard work .she buys my clothes. She feeds me every night. And tells me she loves me every night when I go to bed.
    I like that she buys me clothes. I know they cost a lot of money. She knows all the clothes I like to wear. This time I’m going to buy her some pj’s. But she do they sell snoopy pj’s?
    She feeds me very well. She makes me eat my greens. She makes sure I brush my teeth after every meal. She takes me to the dentist. Tells when I should I should eat candy.
    My mom tells me she loves me every day before school. I know she loves me. Even when I was sick and I got her sick. She gave me all her blankets when I was sick. She needs something to keep her worm.
    So I got the pj’s. But I don’t how she will like them. But she does say how much her feet hurt after work. Plus she needs something worm. She loves snoopy. I need to get her something. Hope she like it very much.

  13. Deajani Pierre Louis 11-24-2017

    Has something kind of bad ever happen to you and your friends that caused y’all to drift away? That happened to me. My and I friend moved away and now I don’t talk to her as much, so something special I would do for her is start a tradition. The tradition would be to go on of our favorite places on Saturdays. That place would probably be the roof top of 620.
    The reason they would enjoy this is because we don’t get to see each other a lot. I think my friend Mamas would enjoy this the most because when we were young (before we meet our other friend khadirah) we used to sit on the roof top when we were mad and just wanted to talk. But after we both moved away we couldn’t do that anymore.
    After moving away I was really mad but after a couple of weeks I got over it because I made a new friend (khadirah) . This would be special to her because I used to always tell her about me and mamas being on the roof top and she always said that she what a quiet place to think and write in peace.
    This would also be special to me because I miss being able to just sit and think in peace and to also have my my friends to vent to when im feeling down.

  14. Keaira Fletcher 11/24/15

    Would you like to do something special for your friends or realitives? Well, I do. I would like to cook for my mom on thanksgiving e has done so much for me. First, she provides food. Secondly, she provides support. Lastly, she provides clothes for me. I want to cook her yams, corn bread, rice, ribs, stuffing, and sweet potato pie. I think she will be surprised and excited!
    One of the reasons why I want to cook for my mom is because she cooks for me. Every day and every night I have food to eat. There are mothers who don’t feed their children. There are children who die from starvation, just because their mothers don’t feed them. But I am thankful my mother makes sure I have food to eat.
    Another reason is, my mom always supports me. For example, when I was dancing at my recital she is always there. Another example is, when I was in the hospital she was right by my side. Most people can’t get support from their parent. But if I need support I can always count on my mom.
    The last reason why I want to cook for my mom is because she always provides clothes for me. Some mothers let their child wear belly shirts at a young age. But my mom buys appropriate clothes for me. Some mothers don’t even buy clothes for their child. But I am thankful my mom buys clothes for me.
    So you can see I have many reasons why I want to cook for my mom. I am going to cook her big meal because she provide a lot of things for me. I hope she likes it so she can see that I appreciate.

  15. Have your family ever done something special for you. My family done a lot for me. For example my mom buys me a lot of cloths. Another thing is that my grandma makes the best cupcakes just for me. I get in a lot a trouble for not taking my hood off in school , so when I get into trouble one of my family members would come to get me. I still don’t get in trouble for how treat most of them and I’m great for that. The only reason I want to throw a surprise party for them is the work so hard and I do nothing.

    My mom buys me so much cloths. One time my mom and I were going to the mall to buy some new cloths for the both of us. So we walk into a store called forever 21. I go looking for some shirts. I was about to go find my mom when I saw the perfect shirt. It was plain grey shirt with buttons and hole in sleeves. The shirts was perfect for me, it was like god She’d like the shirt as much as I did. When she look at the price tag her face the expression change. She sighed and “ Jaden can have this shirt if you take good care of it.” One happiest day of my life.

  16. Have your family ever done something special for you. My family done a lot for me. For example my mom buys me a lot of cloths. Another thing is that my grandma makes the best cupcakes just for me. I get in a lot a trouble for not taking my hood off in school , so when I get into trouble one of my family members would come to get me. I still don’t get in trouble for how treat most of them and I’m great for that. The only reason I want to throw a surprise party for them is the work so hard and I do nothing.
    My mom buys me so much cloths. One time my mom and I were going to the mall to buy some new cloths for the both of us. So we walk into a store called forever 21. I go looking for some shirts. I was about to go find my mom when I saw the perfect shirt. It was plain grey shirt with buttons and hole in sleeves. The shirts was perfect for me, it was like god She’d like the shirt as much as I did. When she look at the price tag her face the expression change. She sighed and “Jaden can have this shirt if you take good care of it.” One happiest day of my life. Another thing is that my grandma is always doing nice thing for me. Just like time when she had stayed up all night and made red velvet cupcakes for 4th grade class and me. I was so happy that I forgot to think her.so when got to school I wrote a thank you letter. She loved it. Everything she does for me and all I can do is right her a letter.
    My lost reason is because my family all ways support me no matter what I do. My mom work at so night so she very tired in the morning. When I had 5th grade award ceremony. I was called up for the most improved award. She still came even though she was tired. What made even more happier was we got frozen yogurt after school. As you can see I’m not the happiest in world, so when people make me happy it’s very rare. There are plenty of good reason I should throw them a surprise party. The best one is that I love them with all heart. They do some much for me. I don’t know even why they do anything for me because I’m not a very person when at home. I’m angry I might do or say mean things. I thank my deserve a party.

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